To what extent does the use of symbolism by George Orwell in 1984 portray the fragility of human thoughts in a controlled society in the book?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Good
A.3Methodology completeness
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- Your investigation has a clear literary focus from the outset and stays centered on Orwell’s novel throughout.
- You maintain a purposeful line of inquiry that connects symbols, control, and the fragility of independent thought.
- The overall method is visible in the way your chapters are organized and developed.
- Your scope is very broad, which limits how deeply each example can be explored.
- The evaluative force of the question is not fully developed, so the discussion sometimes becomes one-sided.
- You do not clearly explain how or why your chosen sources and symbols were selected.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Application of source material
Good
B.2Subject knowledge
Good
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- You use relevant evidence from the novel regularly and appropriately to support your ideas.
- Your understanding of Orwell’s dystopian world is clear and coherent.
- You use literary and critical terminology in mostly accurate and effective ways.
- Some secondary sources are used more to confirm your point than to deepen or challenge it.
- At times you treat complex features such as Newspeak or the Memory Hole too broadly as symbols without enough precision.
- The bibliography and in-text citations are not fully consistent, which weakens the reliability of the research record.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
10/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research quality
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth
Moderate
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure appropriateness
Excellent
D.2Layout considerations
Good
Criteria Feedback
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