¿Hasta qué punto la polifonía favorece a la construcción de la muerte como una atmósfera turbadora en la novela Pedro Páramo de Juan Rulfo?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Framework for the Essay
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question
Excellent
A.2Research methods
Good
A.3Structure
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The research question is clear, literary, and tightly focused on a specific formal device within Pedro Páramo.
- The essay has a logical, easy-to-follow structure that supports the progression of the argument.
- The chapters are coherently organised around distinct narrative voices and help maintain relevance to the research question.
- The method would be stronger if it were defined more rigorously and applied with greater critical precision.
- The essay could explain more clearly why each secondary source is being used and how it supports the specific argument.
- A brief methodological reflection in the conclusion would make the essay feel more self-aware and academically mature.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Knowledge
Good
B.2Understanding (Terminology)
Good
B.3Understanding (Concepts)
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The essay uses a substantial range of relevant literary and narratological terminology with generally sound accuracy.
- Relevant concepts such as polyphony, fragmentation, focalization, and death as atmosphere are explained and used productively.
- The research base includes both primary textual evidence and supporting criticism, giving the essay an academic foundation.
- Some terminology is not used with full precision, especially where narrator, focalization, and omniscience are treated too loosely.
- The discussion of polyphony remains broad at times and would benefit from tighter conceptual distinctions.
- The range of research materials is relevant but not yet comprehensive enough for the highest band.
Criteria C: Analysis and Line of Argument
4/6
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3
6
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C.1Analysis
Good
C.2Line of argument
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation
4/8
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4
8
Criteria Strands
D.1Discussion
Moderate
D.2Evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Formatting
Criteria Strands
F.1The student provides a word count at the beginning of the document
F.2The title of the essay is stated at the start
F.3The work does not surpass the maximum word limit of 4000 words
F.4The pages are numbered
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