¿Hasta qué punto Clara Campoamor plasma la mentalidad de los autóctonos hacia las mujeres en la sociedad española de las primeras décadas del siglo XX en su discurso del 1 de octubre de 1931?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
A.3Methodology completeness
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Topic is communicated accurately and effectively with clear and appropriate purpose and focus throughout the essay.
- The research question is clearly stated, sharply focused and consistently connected to each section of the discussion.
- Transitions between contextual background, textual analysis and socio-historical implications are smooth and maintain alignment with the research focus.
- Methodology is only described in passing and lacks a dedicated section outlining criteria for source selection and evaluation.
- The introduction does not explicitly restate the research question to guide the reader from the outset.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Application of source material
Excellent
B.2Subject knowledge
Excellent
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Source material is applied clearly and appropriately, with quotations and statistics integrated effectively to support arguments.
- Subject knowledge of early 20th-century Spanish history and rhetorical theory is coherent and well structured.
- Terminology and concepts (e.g., paralelismo, antítesis, patriarcado) are used accurately and consistently throughout the analysis.
- Occasional generalisations in the historical context section would benefit from engagement with differing scholarly perspectives.
- Some analytical points (e.g., on politeness strategies) lack reference to established theoretical frameworks.
- Reliance on older statistical data could be strengthened by more recent corroborating evidence.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
9/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research quality
Good
C.2Analysis depth
Good
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure appropriateness
Excellent
D.2Layout considerations
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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