To what extent are young adult Muslim women in Malaysia aware of the concept of Tabarruj when using coloured contact lenses?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
A.3Research methodology
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Topic is communicated accurately and effectively with clear sub-headings guiding the reader.
- Research question is stated verbatim, narrow in scope, and tightly aligned with objectives.
- Methodology is well-described, combining survey and expert interview with ethical considerations and piloting. “},
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- Some explanation is repetitive and drifts into detailed jurisprudential discussion, which interrupts focus.
- Justification for focusing exclusively on female participants is brief, limiting discussion of validity and generalizability.
- Concluding section could offer more specific actionable recommendations for educators.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Subject knowledge
Good
B.2Use of sources
Moderate
B.3Subject-specific terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Demonstrates good command of Islamic concepts, grounding arguments in Qurʼānic verses and Ḥadīth.
- Subject-specific terminology is defined in a glossary and used consistently throughout the essay.
- Connections to contemporary practice in Malaysia show understanding beyond mere description.
- Heavy reliance on fatwa portals and popular websites rather than peer-reviewed scholarship.
- Referencing style is inconsistent, with broken URLs and missing publication details.
- Some quotations are explained only superficially, reducing analytical depth.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
11/12
0
6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research analysis
Moderate
C.2Discussion and evaluation
Poor
C.3Critical argumentation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure
Good
D.2Layout
Good
Criteria Feedback
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