To what extent do Muslims and Buddhists have different perspectives on surrogate motherhood?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Good
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
A.3Research methodology
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The research question is clearly stated, focused and effectively drives the investigation
- Methodology demonstrates a good range of relevant sources and methods
- Topic is communicated accurately with clear definitions and contextualisation
- Sampling procedures and data-analysis techniques are only briefly outlined
- Minor lapses in prose and occasional repetition limit polish
- Research limitations are not critically addressed
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Subject knowledge
Good
B.2Use of sources
Moderate
B.3Subject-specific terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- Sound subject knowledge of both Islamic and Buddhist concepts with accurate scriptural support
- A wide range of sources is consulted and applied to key arguments
- Specialist terminology is generally used correctly
- Treatment of intra-religious diversity and contemporary rulings is limited
- Some claims in the results section lack citation
- Terminological lapses (e.g. inconsistent italicisation) prevent full consistency
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
11/12
0
6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research analysis
Moderate
C.2Discussion and evaluation
Moderate
C.3Critical argumentation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure
Excellent
D.2Layout
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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