To what extent did the development of dating apps such as Tinder impact the expectations and concepts of modern relationships?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Inquiry Focus
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A.1Inquiry Focus
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Clear, focussed inquiry question
- Thorough linkage to a concrete, relevant real-world example
- Explicit mapping to course concepts, context and content
- Title could be more narrowly tailored to reference the specific lawsuit
- Could deepen stakeholder analysis in context section
Criteria B: Claims and perspectives
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B.1Claims and perspectives
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Three sources are clearly summarised with purpose and credibility discussed
- Justification for each source’s usefulness is explicit
- Good balance of personal, economic and institutional perspectives
- Comparative synthesis of perspectives could be more fully developed
- A more critical stance on each source’s limitations would strengthen the discussion
Criteria C: Analysis and evaluation
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C.1Analysis and evaluation
Poor
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Criteria D: Conclusion
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D.1Conclusion
Poor
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Criteria E: Communication
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E.1Communication
Good
Criteria Feedback
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