Microeconomics: Sustainability • Macroeconomics: Intervention • The global economy: InterdependenceHL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Diagrams
3/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
A.1Diagram inclusion and accuracy
Poor
A.2Diagram explanation
Good
Criteria Feedback
- You included two relevant AD–AS diagrams that match the policy discussion.
- The diagrams are clearly labelled with axes, curves, and equilibrium points.
- Your written explanation shows the intended transmission from weaker demand to a shift in aggregate demand.
- The diagrams need a clearer potential-output or long-run reference line to support the deflationary-gap claim.
- Some of the shifts and starting positions are not fully consistent with the written explanation.
- The macroeconomic axis should be more precisely described in relation to the average price level.
Criteria B: Terminology
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria Strands
B.1Use of economic terminology
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You use a good range of relevant macroeconomic terminology.
- You include terms such as aggregate demand, inflation, real GDP, disposable income, and deflationary gap.
- Your vocabulary helps keep the commentary focused on the policy issue in the article.
- Some terms are used imprecisely, especially where the role of the central bank is described as government intervention.
- A few terms are introduced without being fully supported by the diagram or the evidence.
- Some causal statements are awkwardly phrased or not fully accurate.
Criteria C: Application and Analysis
2/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
C.1Application of economic theory
Good
C.2Quality of economic analysis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Key Concept
3/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
D.1Identification of key concept
Excellent
D.2Connection to article
Good
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Criteria E: Evaluation
2/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Quality of judgments
Good
E.2Supporting reasoning
Good
Criteria Feedback
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