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IB Spanish A SL Internal Assessment Example
¿En qué medida el uso de los símbolos temporales y espaciales en Campos de
Castilla funciona como un reflejo de la soledad y la finitud del poeta, tras la
pérdida de su esposa Leonor?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Knowledge, Understanding and Interpretation
5/5
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3
5
Criteria Strands
A.1Knowledge and understanding of the work/text
Excellent
A.2Use of references and textual support
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
You show secure knowledge of Campos de Castilla and its major symbols.
You use a strong range of relevant quotations to support your ideas.
You connect the poems to useful contextual frames such as Machado’s life and the Generation of ’98.
Some interpretive claims are stated too definitively and need more qualification.
A few quotations are not explored in enough depth to show all of their implications.
At times the reading could consider alternative meanings instead of returning to the same conclusion.
Criteria B: Analysis and Evaluation
5/5
0
3
5
Criteria Strands
B.1Analysis of textual features and author's choices
Good
Criteria Feedback
You identify several literary techniques accurately, including symbolism, paradox, antithesis, and chromatic imagery.
You sometimes move beyond description to explain how the language shapes meaning.
Your comparison with Manrique is a particularly effective evaluative moment.
Several sections remain descriptive because they name a device without closely examining how it works.
The same emotional conclusion is repeated after different examples instead of being developed in new ways.
Some analyses could be more precise about syntax, sound, or the immediate poetic context.
Criteria C: Focus, Organization and Development
5/5
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3
5
Criteria Strands
C.1Organization and development of ideas
Excellent
C.2Integration of supporting examples
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Language
3/5
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3
5
Criteria Strands
D.1Language clarity and accuracy
Excellent
D.2Register and style appropriateness
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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