IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example

You chose three clearly specific, real-world objects that give the exhibition strong authenticity and variety.

Your links to the prompt are explicit and sustained, showing clear awareness of the ethical tension at the heart of the topic.

Your commentary is consistently analytical rather than merely descriptive, and each object has a distinct role in the overall argument.

You support your ideas with relevant context and a balanced, nuanced discussion of competing values.

Some claims would be stronger with more precise evidence or tighter qualification, especially where you infer intentions or broad responsibility.

In a few places, you could sharpen the TOK focus by explaining more clearly what kind of knowledge each object produces and why that matters.

The concluding judgement could be a little more decisive in showing how the three objects collectively answer the prompt.